Pyar Hua Chupke Se – Part 25

Maan keeps driving for an hour, not knowing where he was going and what was his destination.

He was clueless about everything. After an hour, he gave up and found himself standing in between the barren land.

He came out, to breath, still felt suffocated. He threw his suit in the car, opened all the buttons of his shirt, he still felt suffocated. He ran on the land, then stopped. He stretched his hands in the air and shouted with all his energy “Nooooooooooooooooo”. He slid down on his knees, and at last cried

“Why? Why Geet? Why?” he was in no sense. He was in no sense to understand what happened with Geet. He was over powered by his own grief. Geet was not only his Geet, she had given herself will fully to someone else. “Sirf meri….” He laughed hysterically at his thought. He had gone so beyond in relation. He has given himself completely to her. Still he knew he was hers and only hers. Her cried “But she is not……. Sirf meri nahi… nahi.. nahi” he rubbed his hand on whole ground wiping it. He sat there for long and then left for guest house.

Geet was worried, she sensed something serious. She tried calling him but he never picked. He saw his cell buzzed with “Sir Meri…. Pagli” and he placed it in vibrator and threw the phone far away.

It was late night when Adi received a call from Boss “Adi, I have some important projects to handle in Delhi. And I can’t spend my whole time on this one project. You take over this project from now on.”

“But Sir suddenly” “I don’t want any argument” “Try wrapping all design and paper work from hear in a month and two. I am leaving tomorrow morning.”

“Ok sir…” “And, keep this just to yourself. Get that” “Sure sir”

Next morning 8 am, Geet again tried calling him, he simply placed his phone to the back seat.

“What happened? I know you are upset with me. What is my fault Maan Sir? What have I done, please tell me”

Geet went to office, today she will talk to him in office, clear why he is upset. Is he doing this all to just trouble her. No, she will scold him if he does it for fun. But somewhere she sensed, it was something not fun.

Geet was continuously looking up to see his cabin but the blinds were down

Maan reached home at around 10 am. Kamini saw him “Maan, you are here, so early and suddenly?”

“Why you are not happy?” “Maa-aan” she scolded. But he left for his room, leaving Kamini all confused. This was not Maan in his usual self.

She waited for Maan downstairs. Maan came all ready and was in mood of going out “Maan, now where are you leaving. You have just come beta”

“Mom, I am going to office.” “But Maan” Maan simply left. He was in no sense of what he was doing why he was doing. He simply wanted to absorb himself somewhere and office was the best place.

While Geet on other side “Adi Sir”

“Geet I want all these design and suggestion ready in a week”

But Geet ignored him “Adi Sir… Maan sir is not in today?”

“Why? Why do you need to know? He is the M.D. and you suppose your boss to give detail of M.D. of company to his report”

“No Adi Sir, not that way. Maan sir looked disturbed yesterday”

“Geet, are you busy in observing Maan sir or in your work? Here are other employees as well, none is bothered”

“Sorry Adi Sir”

Adi then felt bad. He knew Geet was sensitive due to her past and thus she worried about all

“Geet, listen. Enjoy your life. Don’t stress about others. OK… Sorry for being rude”

“It’s OK Adi Sir.”

Geet felt helpless, he was not picking her phone.

In Khurana Mansion, Maan returned from office at night around 10 pm.

“Maan” said his Dad in loud voice. Maan looked at him and stopped “What happened. I hear from your Mom, your behavior”

“Dad, office work need little more aggressiveness, if we want to stay on top.” And he left

Maan was about to leave for his room when “Hi Maan” Sameera popped up from other end. Maan blankly looked at her, not even wanting to register why she was here. He just left for his room.

Later, when Kamini entered his room with his dinner plate, he was lost in his files and laptop and drink.

“Maan what’s the matter beta”

“Mom please I am just working. Is that such big issue?”

“Ok, have your dinner” “Mom, I don’t eat so late, you know. Had munched something in office”

Kamini left, thinking maybe it was one of his bad day. But days kept passing by and Maan’s aloofness just increased. He would wake up early, and did rigorous gym of 2 hours, almost sending himself in pain.

Sameera, tried to be friend him, he completely ignored her presence in the house. Dadima, Vicky, Annie, Kamini and Raj, he started cutting off from all. Just formality yes no. Even if he sat for lunch or dinner, he would just have bite or two and leave

“This is not right. There is something very big.” Said Dadima

“Sameera beta. You should try to talk to Maan. You can also come close to him by sharing his pain. Maybe he is not able to talk to us, you can try” suggested Kamini.

But nothing worked. Maan simply kept himself busy. He would be in in Gym and breaking the ice, wooden fat blocks.

It had been 15 days now, and Geet was completely lost case. She did not know what to do. She used to leave office in mid, not caring at all of Adi’s scolding. She would go to his guest house, stay there for long, searching for him. Fix the already fixed house every day. She would fix it and no one was there to mess it up, still she did her routine each day. The house was now full of her time.

At home, people started noticing her becoming lost again. But Why? She was getting all normal, then why sudden. They tried to keep the home environment lively, Nandu, Rajji and Brij.. tried teasing her but her response was gone.

Now it was one month and Geet had almost started skipping her meal. Nothing went under her throat. She started being irregular in office. Adi, knowing her past did not want to get her out of office but her working and being completely nonproductive was troubling him. He tried to talk to Maan. The moment he would say word Geet “Adi, can’t you handle one project.” And disconnect.

Maan has now completely cut off from all, just being dug in office, drink and Gym. His became super discipliner in office. He got big projects in this one month but celebrated none. His life felt empty, nothing satisfied him. Geet was not his, nothing was left in his life, he just wanted to finish everything.

He used to drink and just one thought “Meri nahi hai who.. sirf meri nahi hai.”

“She bore his child.” “What am I ?” “Who am I to her?” “Kuch bhi nahi”

Geet – She started getting depression attack, she ignored her food and her health started deteriorating.  Brij, requested for her long leave. Geet almost lost all her senses.

One side Maan, other side Geet – both were leading the lifeless life.

It had been 1.5 months now and Maan somehow was seating with family. They have stopped interfering now as he would just leave. But that day Kamini’s eye went on the locket in Maan’s neck .

“What is this you are wearing.” Maan ignored “Someone gifted” “Where?”

“In HP” “Remove it immediately. These people from small town does all sort of weird things and you don’t even know the effect.”

“Ohh this may be the reason of change in Maan” added Dadima. Maan just ignored everything these days.

“Maan remove it, now” Maan was least interested in any argument, he took it off “Fine now.”

“Give me, I will throw it”

Somehow his heart was not ready to throw it “I will keep it somewhere, I mean anywhere. Don’t worry now” he simply got up and left

“What has happened to this boy. I simply want to know the reason of my son’s trouble” Kamini felt like crying

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16 thoughts on “Pyar Hua Chupke Se – Part 25

  1. Nice part but sad after reading 🥺
    Both are suffering 🥺, please dono ko dur maat Karo ,I know Maan is correct in his place but what was geet’s fault.hope sub jaldi thik hojaye.thank you for update 😊❤️
    Lovely story and become more interesting ❤️

  2. ohh this was soo heartbreaking
    maan couldnt bear even the thought of geet having anyone else in her life n she had someone else baby tearing him apart…he is just too possessive ….here geet too in bad shape …i was worried about maan might saying yes to sameera in rage but thankfully he seems to ignore her…n takes tabeez off him thats not a good sound….how is this gonna move ahead cant wait to read

  3. very sad update
    both geet n maan suffering resulting maan cut off from family n geet in depression

  4. Both are in pain…

    Maan is feeling betrayed… He is unable to get over the fact that she was once with someone else on her own will.. He is in so much pain..

    Hope he gets over it.. And sees her pov as well…

    Geet is missing him..

    Both are suffering…

    But for this suffering to end they will have to meet n talk to each other..

    Hope their suffering ends sooner..

  5. What’s going on?! Such a sad part 😪 both are suffering so much it’s really hard to read about their despair. Maan is going crazy with only one thing running in him – she’s not his. He feels cheated. Geet doesn’t know why Maan suddenly blocked her from his life. Eager for next

  6. Tragedy be fallen on them. His grife and anguish is justified but … Its love that they share. Love doesn’t need any logic and any condition. Hope they overcome this painful condition soon.

  7. A Heart Aching Update

    What has suddenly happened to Maan
    that he believes though Geet is his still she fully is not his
    both Maan and Geet are suffering apart and with this
    indifference between them , its killing them
    I’m just hoping soon Maan can at least come to Hoshiapur
    and hopefully see Geet
    Maan’s behavior also has changed a lot and its only Geet that
    can truly calm him
    I’m just hoping soon both can somehow meet each other

  8. Congrats on 25 updates

    Part 25
    Heart wrenching update…. Well written
    Maan is shattered that Geet was never only his
    he cannot accept her past
    is this is love?
    of cos Geet is worried about him
    as expected Maan does not answer her call
    oh no he is going to Delhi and told Adi not to tell anyone
    wish that Maan would have spoken to Geet before he left
    Geet is tensed and restless
    at least she asked Adi about Maan
    Adi was indeed rude but apologises
    so Maan drowns himself in work
    his family are worried about him
    great that Maan ignores Sameera
    he tires himself in his gym and hurts himself
    well his mom assumes Sameera will help Maan overcome his pain
    sad seeing Maan and Geet’s condition
    they are in immense pain
    now Geet is again depressed
    if only Geet would have told Maan about her past
    Maan should have confronted Geet instead of leaving
    upset that Maan is drinking
    he does even want to hear Geet’s name
    Geet’s health is deteriorating
    her family’s concern is reasonable
    Thank God Maan did not allow his mom to throw the locket away
    but he removed it
    will it affect Geet?
    I want Maan to go to HP!
    Maan and Geet need each other

    update soon

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